@spark187
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spark187 commented on the post, Fiona's Dilemma, on the site kikistories1 3 years ago
It seemed that Fionna is depressed about something, but I don’t think it has to do with her age. She has a job she hates and her sister is always bullying her. I hope she can find some happiness within herself.
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spark187 commented on the post, Your vision, on the site The Fall 4 years, 11 months ago
I write stories constantly. I kind of an obsession. This was a quick response. I get tickled when anyone responds at all.
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spark187 wrote a new post, The Fall: Part 1, on the site The Fall 4 years, 11 months ago
This is a new story I came up with, and I’m not sure where this is going. It might be novel long or just a short piece.
A young Sadian girl had been gliding through the trees trying to keep up with Hevonen, […]
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spark187 created the site The Fall 4 years, 11 months ago
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spark187 replied to the topic How and how often do you proofread? in the forum Writing Content 4 years, 11 months ago
In first drafts we are just getting our ideas down. Draft 2 is for fleshing out and smoothing out the ruff edges. Draft 3 is for bringing it as close to prefect as possible.
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spark187 replied to the topic in the forum spark187 4 years, 11 months ago
I’m in the middle of writing my first werewolf story, but it’s not a typical story, before the werewolf is a dog.
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spark187 replied to the topic How and how often do you proofread? in the forum Writing Content 4 years, 11 months ago
I proof it after I write and then go over it a second time.
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spark187 replied to the topic in the forum spark187 4 years, 11 months ago
That’s cool. I always liked ghost stories.
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spark187 wrote a new post, The Last Goodbye: Part 3, on the site Twist of Fate 4 years, 11 months ago
Brooke used her car to drive herself and Zoe back to Marla’s house where her aunt and grandparents were worriedly awaiting her return.
“Sweetheart, we were so worried,” her grandmother said holding tightly to […]
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spark187 wrote a new post, The Past Returns: Part 4, on the site Deeds of the Unforgiven 4 years, 11 months ago
Spending time with Dusk seemed so much easier and relaxed. Four years had changed him in a way. He was still that same gruff mountain man, but he didn’t seem as angry or as intense as he once was.
“So this is […]
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spark187 commented on the post, Hummingbird Feeders | Keep Ants Out, on the site Twist of Fate 4 years, 11 months ago
Thanks Kiki, this is a different kind of story then I usually write, but it’s just screaming to get out. I plan to write a lot more on it.
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spark187 wrote a new post, The Last Goodbye: Part 2, on the site Twist of Fate 4 years, 11 months ago
It took a better part of an hour before Zoe came down stairs and only because she heard the familiar adult voices of her aunt and grandparents conversing downstairs. Paul and Elizabeth Evans were the best […]
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Great story, Allison. It’s different than your other pieces. Your writing style has evolved over these past few years. I found this story in particular to have a nice charm to it. Overall, it’s rather lovely.
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Thanks Kiki, this is a different kind of story then I usually write, but it’s just screaming to get out. I plan to write a lot more on it.
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spark187 wrote a new post, The Last Goodbye: Part 1, on the site Twist of Fate 4 years, 11 months ago
Chapter Five: The Last Goodbye
Zoe barely slept the night before, and when she did finally drift off she was awakened by a phone ringing. It was sitting on the nightstand, and she glanced at the clock that was […]
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spark187 wrote a new post, The Part Returns: Part 3, on the site Deeds of the Unforgiven 4 years, 11 months ago
Marianna saw that her luggage was in the hallway outside her room. Julia must have had someone drop it there, so she didn’t have to go back into the foyer to get it. She had three pieces of luggage and her purse w […]
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spark187 wrote a new post, When Fate Steps In: Part 7, on the site Twist of Fate 4 years, 11 months ago
She heard noises coming from the spare room and saw that the door was ajar. She peeked in to see her niece rummaging through a suitcase and walked into the doorway and stood there watching what she was doing. She […]
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spark187 wrote a new post, The Past Returns: Part 2, on the site Deeds of the Unforgiven 4 years, 11 months ago
When she walked inside she was amazed at how big the place was. Her uncle certainly had built an amazing place for Sadians to live and learn.
“Momma, are we in a castle?” Reese asked when he saw the replica of […]
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spark187 wrote a new post, The Past Returns: Part 1, on the site Deeds of the Unforgiven 4 years, 11 months ago
Chapter Six: The Past Returns
Marianna and Julia took turns driving, while the non-driver was in charge of keeping Reese occupied, so he didn’t get too bored. The trip took several days, and Marianna refused to […] -
spark187 wrote a new post, On the Road Again, on the site Deeds of the Unforgiven 4 years, 11 months ago
Back to the present…
Marianna was practically up all night. She couldn’t get the image of being burned alive about of her head, that along with the dreams that she had been having, she was sure that danger was […]
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Well, it reads very nicely wether short or long. I wish I could come up with stories either way this way.
I write stories constantly. I kind of an obsession. This was a quick response. I get tickled when anyone responds at all.